You have learnt how to vary the structure of a narrative by using different ways to begin a narrative. All of us have learnt to begin a narrative by introducing a setting and main characters in Lower Primary. In Composition 1, attempt to use a different sentence starter. You may begin with either one of the following:
- Flashback
- Coda
- Complication
- Resolution
1. Putting life into the character
- Using dialogues
- Including inner thoughts
2. Sound effects
-A scream
-A cry for help
-Someone sobbing
-A loud thud or smashing sound
3. Use of alternatives to She/he said
- "Do not worry! You can do it," she encouraged.
- "Do not worry! You can do it," she assured us with a smile.
- "Do not worry! You can do it," she cheered loudly.
4. Use of alternative to She/he cried.
5. Expressions of fear, happiness, relief
I am looking forward to the first piece of writing from you next Monday.
Additional links:
- Information about tarantulas http://animals.nationalgeographic.com/animals/bugs/tarantula/
- Information about trypanophobia http://www.healthline.com/health/big-shots-trypanophobia-facts#.VsU5Lpp97IU
- Information about rockclimbing http://greatist.com/move/rock-climbing-tips
Regards,
Mrs Goh